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The Wind of Relief

In the late late night Of the sunny winter, in an instant thought while breezing outside, without saying a bye, Without a blanket A naked cold wind Had flown from here, its been holded a fluffy peice of snow. if it not melted in between, when flying overhead through the deserts, through the valleys, Through the sand dunes, Through the top of ocean, Through the hearts sure, next morning The cold wind of relief will serve you.

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Date: 10/17/2024 8:37:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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