The Wind of Chimes

Crystal classic wooden treats
Somehow broken rhythmic beats
Tangled webs of cords and bells
Glass pottery or beautiful shells
Winded blown from East to West
Chiming luck putting evil at rest
Placed in homes from North to South
Graceful and alluring standing proud
Swinging flirting dancing upon
Angels messages passed along



22 August 2018
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Capitano Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Well done Francesca, smooth flow and sounds. I love wind chimes, their musical contribution to harmony.
Pappadogiannis Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 9:12 AM
Thank you very much, Phil. Much appreciated!
Kiser Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 5:07 AM
Beautiful poem with great imagery and flow. Are you into Feng Shui?
Pappadogiannis Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 3:05 PM
Thank you very much M.L. Kiser. Yes I am :)
Wheatley Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 7:20 PM
I like this a lot. Good imagery.
Pappadogiannis Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 3:32 PM
Many thanks Alycia :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 8:39 AM
I really like this, Francesca. Good luck in the contest.
Pappadogiannis Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 3:32 PM
Ah, thank you very much Andrea xxx
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