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The Wind Nursery Rhyme I am the wind outside your door. I’ll take your kite and make it soar. I dry the land after it rains. I’ll lift the wings of each toy plane. The clouds will put me in my place. I push the sailboats as they race. I make the windmill spin around. You can’t see me, but you’ll hear my sound. An open window will let me in. I’ll see your mobile and make it spin. If your room is hot, I’ll come to call. I’ll cool you down so you won’t bawl. I’m sent by Jesus, so don’t be sad. I’ll help you play with Mom and Dad. If I’m not heard I’ll be back soon. Till then I’ll rest in each balloon. 3/14/2021

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Date: 3/21/2021 3:31:00 PM
what a delightful rhyme Mark, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/20/2021 9:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Mark, in my Nursery Rhyme2 contest. A great children story for little children. Please visit my blog on the contest, it explains a little on how I judged. Nursery Rhyme 2 Contest. - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/20/2021 12:19:00 PM
Ahh, I see a little kid at heart here, Mark! Just delightful. And I love the reference to the loving hand of Jesus in the wind. Congratulations my friend!
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Date: 3/20/2021 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful nursery rhyme and picture. "So Cute" Have a blessed day/weekend.
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Date: 3/20/2021 10:32:00 AM
- Back with congratulations :)
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Date: 3/15/2021 5:29:00 PM
WoW! Mark, What a good “ nursery rhyme” poem about the wind. It's a good informative write for the little ones. Good picture, content and rhymes. Well done:-) Alexis
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Mark Koplin
Date: 3/16/2021 8:09:00 AM
Thank you again my friend!!
Date: 3/14/2021 6:01:00 PM
You've written so much about the wind, and yet it's not something that can be seen. Good work, Mark.
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Date: 3/14/2021 11:37:00 PM
Thanks Jenna, I appreciate that my friend!
Date: 3/14/2021 3:57:00 PM
I like the voice of your ode to wind, Mark. Kids will love to sing along --lovely rhymes!
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Date: 3/14/2021 11:36:00 PM
Thank you Vijay!
Date: 3/14/2021 3:49:00 PM
Hello Mark … a great nursery rhyme that is very informative for children - well done Mark - Lindsay
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Mark Koplin
Date: 3/14/2021 11:36:00 PM
Thanks Lindsay!
Date: 3/14/2021 1:28:00 PM
- A lovely nursery rhyme ... good to read on the bed for the kids - Hope you like my nursery rhyme :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mark Koplin
Date: 3/14/2021 11:36:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I'll go check it out. Good luck to you as well.
Date: 3/14/2021 9:42:00 AM
That’s a lovely nursery rhyme Mark, children are sure to love it. Great picture too ~ Belle
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Mark Koplin
Date: 3/14/2021 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Belle, I appreciate your kind comment!

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