The Wind Lays

The wind lays Sunbeams shine through Dust laiden fog Ole black crow Lands 'pon weaken pecan limb Gogyohka form....

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Erich Goller

Date: 11/11/2012 9:35:00 AM

That's a beautiful Tanka poem,I enjoyed reading it. God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/8/2012 9:08:00 AM

Beautiful picture of imagination. Loved always, bl

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/3/2012 3:58:00 AM

Excellent piece enjoyed.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/2/2012 12:14:00 PM

I agree w/Harry....very cool indeed! jimbo

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/2/2012 10:19:00 AM

I sure enjoy your tanka's Sara.. and this is pure magic....

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/31/2012 11:24:00 AM

I wish we could see the sunbeams shine through today...its a dreary Halloween here! But I'll take it...if it could only thunder and lightning! That would bring an ambiance! I really enjoyed reading this awesome and delightful poem this afternoon! No Full Moon tonight due to the clouds :( but I will make the best of it! I will only be online for a few more minutes then it's all Halloween fun! Enjoy your Halloween Sara! Great Work!!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/31/2012 11:16:00 AM

Like the scene this poem creates. love phyl