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The Wind Lays

The wind lays
Sunbeams shine through
Dust laiden fog
Ole black crow
Lands 'pon weaken pecan limb  

Gogyohka form....

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Erich Goller

November 11, 2012 at 9:35 AM

That's a beautiful Tanka poem,I enjoyed reading it. God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Bl Devnath

November 8, 2012 at 9:08 AM

Beautiful picture of imagination. Loved always, bl

Anthony Nutter

November 3, 2012 at 3:58 AM

Excellent piece enjoyed.

James Marshall Goff

November 2, 2012 at 12:14 PM

I agree w/Harry....very cool indeed! jimbo

Harry Horsman

November 2, 2012 at 10:19 AM

I sure enjoy your tanka's Sara.. and this is pure magic....

Russell Sivey

October 31, 2012 at 11:24 AM

I wish we could see the sunbeams shine through today...its a dreary Halloween here! But I'll take it...if it could only thunder and lightning! That would bring an ambiance! I really enjoyed reading this awesome and delightful poem this afternoon! No Full Moon tonight due to the clouds :( but I will make the best of it! I will only be online for a few more minutes then it's all Halloween fun! Enjoy your Halloween Sara! Great Work!!