Matthew Anish Poet Blank verse

The Wind Knows

You'll see the truth 
when it comes in on the breeze
      Caught in the 
moving winds of time
      Old realities 
  pass us by 
     and we are suddenly 
ready for a 
            sea - change
           Deep flagons of 
wine
      await us at 
journey's end
let's move
      down the path
with a jaunty 
   air about us
After all, we have 
   just gained self 
knowledge
   Like the sun cutting 
through the clouds
     Our new songs will
replace the tired old ones
Drink deeply of the fruit of the vine
Laughter is a friend we can count on

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Laurie Ginn May 3, 2009 at 4:23 AM I love the way you format its a treat to behold and then your words, I love your style~

Carolyn Devonshire April 21, 2009 at 4:37 PM Sometimes as we sail on the "winds of time," we need to change direction. Indeed, "Our new songs will replace the tired old ones." Beautifully written and very intuitive message! Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi April 19, 2009 at 5:44 PM yes true, a good laugh helps in so many ways!! I intend to make a fool of myself Tues. at a dancing class!! Lol Light & Love

April 19, 2009 at 11:23 AM Love the last line--so true. Nice use of imagery. Enjoyed this one. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Denis Joe April 19, 2009 at 9:07 AM It is a real pleasure when someone goes to the trouble of laying out a narrative in order to please the eye. This narrative flows beautifully and has a lovely musical sound to it as well. The dominance of 'O' and 'U' sounds gives the poem a deep and mournful feel; adding a seriousness to the theme. It works well at all levels.

Arany P. April 19, 2009 at 2:30 AM Matthew ... this is an excellent write! your words are so inspiring! the last line seems to be like a writing on its own! well written! ~ Arany

Sharon Winter April 18, 2009 at 4:36 PM So lovely. You sense what the wind knows, and you have wise words for us all. Such a beautiful last line too. Love, Shar

Charmaine Chircop April 18, 2009 at 1:12 PM laughter is a friend we can count on,i keep that in mind whenever im gloomy-charma

Not Anymore April 18, 2009 at 12:42 PM That's great; it's light, lively, and metaphoric. Good job!