The Wind Cried

The Wind Cried

The wind cried out in pain
merging with the falling rain, 
battering against the old window pane.
Again and again,
it called out your wretched name;
it called out your wretched name...
again and again.

Yes, that old wind sighed, 
it moaned and cried
knowing that love died.

Why, why did you go,
leaving me behind like a shadow?
Stirring my still-born dreams
in a black broken tea cup?
The minute you left,
love tip-toed away
brokenhearted like rotting leaves,
blowing down a lonely highway. 

Yes, that old wind sighed 
it moaned and cried
knowing that love died.
 
A pot of bitter herbs 
brewing on the earthen stove,
as a nameless wind called out
for love to return.

Yes, that old wind sighed 
it moaned and cried
knowing that love died.


Song Choice: 2. The Wind Cries Mary - Jimi Hendrix – 
                          https://youtu.be/ylbRDXKSauQ

Contest: 	     Musical Inspiration
Sponsor: 	     Joseph May
Date: 	     05-23-2019
Placement:     2nd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Fleming Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 10:25 AM
Err........this is seriously good, Pandita. You do know that, right? I mean this is good enough to be published...it really is as simple as that. Absolutely superb! My very best wishes. :) john
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March 22, 2020 at 6:14 PM
Hi John, thanks a million for your superlative compliments which mean the world to me. The thought never occurred to me that any of my work was worth publishing. Thank you for giving me the ultimate compliment! Have a wonderful week ahead. Love and hugs. Pandita
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March 9, 2020 at 12:25 PM
Hello Panita Sachez, When the wind blows and moans that is usually means a storm is happening. have a nice day my friend.
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March 22, 2020 at 6:07 PM
Hello Darlene, thank you it's great to hear from you! Hope you are enjoying a great weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Kiser Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 8:14 AM
Great piece of work; enjoyable and written with feeling.
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July 22, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Oh thank you my friend for your wonderful comments and compliments that support my efforts! Hugs. Pandita
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July 21, 2019 at 3:26 PM
Such a great write Pandita, lovely rhyme and flow too. Really super imagery and insightful thought.
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July 21, 2019 at 5:59 PM
Hi Gordon, thank you for stopping by and complimenting this piece! I'm happy you liked it! Best regards. Please visit again. Pandita
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 8:00 PM
Ths is REALLY nice work. I see it won a contest. Congratulations!! I did not know this contest had been judged already. Or maybe I just forgot!
Sietesantos Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 6:26 PM
My friend, Andie, many thanks for your lovely compliments which I appreciate! Have a wonderful weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Callus Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 5:15 PM
Looking at the title my mind was already transported to 'The Wind Cries Mary' by Jimi Hendrix, and I was glad to find out that I was not wrong. The wind cries when the heart aches...a beautiful rendition, Pandita. Congratulations on your fine win, my friend. ~ Hugs // paul
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July 6, 2019 at 6:25 PM
Hi Paul, thank you very much for visiting and leaving me your lovely compliments. Hope you are enjoying the weekend! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Sergi Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 6:34 PM
Great rendition, Pandita. congratulations!
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June 13, 2019 at 12:41 PM
Hello Ralph, many thanks for your compliments which I appreciate! Have a great day! Hugs. Pandita
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 8:08 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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June 11, 2019 at 1:16 PM
My dear Anne-Lise, it's always so nice to hear from you - thank you so much for your congratulations! Hugs and love! Pandita
Hamilton Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 8:54 PM
Well done Pandita congrats on your win!
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June 11, 2019 at 1:02 PM
John, I appreciate your kind congratulatory words. Hugs. Pandita
May Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 12:40 PM
So sad when "the wind sighs when love is lost", Wonderful write Pandita, Congrats on your win..
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June 11, 2019 at 1:01 PM
Hi Joseph, I am so delighted to be on your winners' list. Thank you so much and have a lovely day! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita
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May 26, 2019 at 6:19 PM
Enjoyed this very much Pandita. Sadly beautiful
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May 26, 2019 at 6:40 PM
Hi Allen, I hope you are having an enjoyable weekend and thank you so much for your wonderful compliments. My muse took me to a sad place with this one! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Hamilton Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 10:39 AM
Enjoyed this lyrical write Pandita, should do well in the contest!
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May 25, 2019 at 11:01 PM
Hi John, thank you very much for visiting and leaving me your lovely compliments. Hope you are enjoying the weekend! Hugs and best regards. Pandita
Pandit Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 7:11 AM
I heard the cries of the wind..an excellent write, as always..all the best Pandita.
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May 24, 2019 at 7:49 AM
Dear Vijay, it's always so nice to hear from you - thank you so much for your continued support and compliments for this piece! Enjoy the weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Wolf Avatar
May 23, 2019 at 6:50 PM
Nice adaptation of Hendrix's breathy classic, Pandita. Good luck in the contest! Best wishes, Gershon
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May 24, 2019 at 7:45 AM
My friend, Gershon, many thanks for your lovely compliments which I appreciate! Have a wonderful weekend! Hugs. Pandita
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