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The Wind

She rested last night Now pushing out the wet gloom Sunny rays appear

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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/8/2014 6:01:00 AM

Haiku Of heigh.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2014 1:53:00 PM

beautifully penned haiku:-) hugs Jan xxx

Skat A

Date: 10/7/2014 11:56:00 AM

Willow, lovely haiku. SKAT

Jasonpoet Boyd

Date: 10/7/2014 10:43:00 AM

sun rain wind and snow all work together to keep the world clean and warm. Lovely visual thank you

Darlene Gifford

Date: 10/7/2014 10:28:00 AM

Willow, I've never heard that used as a first name before. I like it. It sounds poetic. And I liked your poem. I'm glad we have the wind to sweep away the morning gloom so the sun can shine on our day. Blessings, Darlene

Willow Lawrence
Date: 10/7/2014 10:35:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words....I have been meaning to get back to haiku for years! I am enjoying it so much.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/7/2014 10:26:00 AM

I love zhis haiku..Will wait for more :.)

Willow Lawrence
Date: 10/7/2014 10:36:00 AM

thank you!

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/7/2014 10:21:00 AM

Sunny rays appear.....good.