The Wind

She rested last night
Now pushing out the wet gloom
Sunny rays appear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Thajudeen Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 6:01 AM
Haiku Of heigh.
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 1:53 PM
beautifully penned haiku:-) hugs Jan xxx
A  Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 11:56 AM
Willow, lovely haiku. SKAT
Boyd Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 10:43 AM
sun rain wind and snow all work together to keep the world clean and warm. Lovely visual thank you
Gifford Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 10:28 AM
Willow, I've never heard that used as a first name before. I like it. It sounds poetic. And I liked your poem. I'm glad we have the wind to sweep away the morning gloom so the sun can shine on our day. Blessings, Darlene
Lawrence Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 10:35 AM
Thank you for your kind words....I have been meaning to get back to haiku for years! I am enjoying it so much.
Chircop Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 10:26 AM
I love zhis haiku..Will wait for more :.)
Lawrence Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 10:36 AM
thank you!
Thajudeen Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 10:21 AM
Sunny rays appear.....good.
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