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The Wind

Time slowed as the days got longer, I was nothing but a leaf in the wind Going wherever the wind blew me, She was the wind, who I adored so much, But as much as I did, I couldn't continue like this, So I had to change, What else was I to do in this world? Rational feelings have no hold on me anymore He broke me, and tore my hearts to shreds, The only thing left was her The flowing wind that seems to never end, But when it does, she will become the leaf And I will take her wherever she needs to go ... But for now, She is flying me into hell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/18/2014 11:34:00 AM
WOW - This is such a beautiful, powerful, inspirational write that I truly enjoyed. A warm welcome to PoetrySoup, my friend. Best wishes and happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 8/18/2014 6:36:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry soup Tiffani, A ride of a first poem, going where ever the wind blew me, I hope it keeps blowing your hands to write more poetry, enjoy this new home and write on ;)
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Date: 8/17/2014 9:51:00 PM
Tiffani,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/17/2014 1:06:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Tiffani - I choose your first very well written free verse :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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