The Wind

From my lips
Songs of love
In the wind

Wind catches
Garden gate
A rhythm

Slow dancing
With the wind
Daffodils



For the "Ellip" contest..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Iloduba Jnr Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 5:55 PM
deeply spirited!
Williams Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 1:19 PM
belated congrats on your win...David
Squyres Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 8:18 AM
Listening to the wind now..as March howls it's voice !! Love the rhythm of the objects in the poem... Congrats on your win !!
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations on your fine win with this amazing write! Lori
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 2:03 AM
Congrats on your HM Barbara , I am envious of all those that tried this and placed xx
Haick Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 12:04 PM
Congratulations on a fine win, Barbara. Annalise
A   Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 10:13 AM
Barbara, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 7:14 AM
Sweet! Congrats on your win. Connie
Mannan Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 9:59 PM
Warmest congrats on this super win BG.
Gigno Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 8:38 PM
!!!
Sivey Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 10:32 AM
This is a fabulously wonderful write my friend! I loved reading this enlightening poem this afternoon! What a supreme piece, quite the delightful poem, Great Work!!
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