Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Choka

The Wide Sky

A Look up on high  
Pure blue that catches the eye 
Makes you want to fly.

Height that makes you see 
The reasons why you are free
To create a dream. 

Dare to strive up high
Where limits do not exist
Rise where eagles fly.

Dare to find the place
Where wise phantom minds inspire
You to divine grace.

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 10.30.10

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Robert A. Dufresne February 7, 2011 at 5:35 AM Hi Caroline... nice to hear from you. This is great poetry to start off the day. gets one motivated and inspired. Nice choice of wording to produce this desired effect. Funny how a manipulation of words can create any array of attitudes and feelings. Such is the power of poetry. Nice job of it!

Gert W. Knop November 12, 2010 at 8:36 AM Bonjour, Caroline, espérez que vous êtes bien et aviez une semaine grande! I was too busy recently with revising my manuscript for my book. Now nearly everything is completed, but only have to change my cover a bit. So many times I dreamt that I could fly!!! Ihr Gedicht gefaellt mir gut! Alles Gute, Gert, et un week-end agréable!

Jay Del Fierro November 5, 2010 at 11:14 AM heights unimaginable is a lofty goal indeed....peace , jay

Carolyn Devonshire October 31, 2010 at 8:25 AM I just love the inspiration you provide in this wonderfully uplifting poem, Caroline, and I'm delighted to see you posting again. We all have our struggles and things with which we have to deal, but we should always "Dare to strive up high." Excellent poetry, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 31, 2010 at 7:42 AM Awesome piece Caroline.. very positive and upbeat lines so uplifting to the reader ... captured the positive influence we all need to function luv.. enjoyed this Halloween Sunday ..

Sara Kendrick October 30, 2010 at 3:18 PM Enjoyed your heightened delight..I want to fly also..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta October 30, 2010 at 2:21 PM Nice expressions - wise phantom minds inspire you to divine grace, the write, Carolineenjoyed