The Whole Gift of Life

The whole gift of life,
was passed from man to woman,
it went from shadow to light,
angels dressed in hearts
opened a tunnel through 
which life would pass,
doves sang,like flying violins.

When I appeared from my long absence,
I stayed suspended,between, 
equinox and solstice, 
I saw how two people shared life,
how love bursts forth in happiness,
how a wave of passion is born,
like two hearts that touch,
like a blast of honey that flows singing,
From above,I saw my path,breaking 
away from thorny uncertainty, 
from shadow,that I did not ask for,
The whole of life is destined for me, 
like a brilliant light,
like an immense wave of sweetness.

In a sudden,
I recognized,from my perch,
those loving hands,as if before
I existed they had touched me, 
I recognized her soft warm womb
(transparent)that cradled me, 
the waters that soothed me, 
and her body,where lightningbolts 
of birth began and ended.

That's how I came into this world,
from,The whole gift of life,that
was passed from man to woman.
I saw it all from my sky-------------California Blue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/8/2016 2:09:00 PM
Thanks for writing such a lovely poem about life. You described life so beautifully. It is an amazing wonder to be in your mothers womb and then enter into this world a real live, human being. You captivates the reader in each verse
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad