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The Whiteness

I read your words I try to comprehend Ideas so complex my mind starts to bend I can't stop thinking I'm stuck in this trap It's driving me crazy I want my brain back Sinking and sinking I can't take any more Poetry in motion eating at my core Wait I see the answer I'm not under attack You provided the whitness To help guide me back

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/14/2012 12:50:00 PM
Richard, the light is the answer... enjoyed the poem....pd
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/14/2012 3:39:00 PM
Thanks Linda, fully agree.
Date: 11/14/2012 8:32:00 AM
Great write, my friend, with a nice little ending! Have a great Wednesday... cheers, Jake
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/14/2012 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Jack
Date: 11/13/2012 6:23:00 PM
Love the way this unfolds with such abbreviated lines. Has a wonderful story and is a gem to read. :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2012 7:54:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words Elizabeth.

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