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The White Roses Died With You

Eighteen years ago today, the white roses died with you My strength was taken with sudden gasps for air The purity of what we shared, the cold wind blew Straight from earth like lightening, far, far away The black crows called over your grave in dismay How could my life go on with a tragedy so unfair? Doom greeted me in mornings of a nightmare that is real I stumbled around, trying to find balance moving ahead There was not a soul anywhere who could know how I feel It was me against the world, staggering through the dark Facts ripping pain through my heart, shadows strikingly stark So, with prayers I traveled on many trips to your grave I fled Heidi Sands 12/23/18 1st place joint win for Rhyme Time 7 – Deep Dark Poetry Contest. Theme: The White Roses Died With You Rhyme: ABACCB DEDFFE

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Date: 1/15/2019 4:28:00 PM
Beautiful in its sadness, Heidi. Death can be so painful for those left to deal with it! Congratulations on your top win. Regards // paul
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2019 4:38:00 PM
Thank you Paul. Yes, it certainly can be. I appreciate your feedback :)
Date: 1/14/2019 5:48:00 PM
Congratulations Heidi on your win!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2019 5:50:00 PM
Thank you very much Wren :)
Date: 1/14/2019 4:26:00 PM
So sad and heartfelt, but beautifully written, Heidi. Congratulations on your First Place win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2019 5:06:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 1/14/2019 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/14/2019 5:05:00 PM
Thank you very much Sandy :)
Date: 12/24/2018 11:54:00 AM
Heidi, this is such a moving write for the contest. Very well done ! Happy Monday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/24/2018 12:01:00 PM
Thank you Mike. I appreciate your comment on this! Happy Monday ! xxoo
Date: 12/24/2018 8:06:00 AM
Very nicely written for the contest, Heidi, best of luck. John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/24/2018 8:13:00 AM
Thank you John. That means a lot to me. I appreciate your comment. Merry Christmas! :)
Date: 12/23/2018 6:01:00 PM
aww Heidi so deep and sad and unfortunately your words will resonate with many especially at this time of the year, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/23/2018 6:12:00 PM
Thank you Jan. The contest just happened to be at the same time as the day (today) that it happened. I appreciate your support :)
Date: 12/23/2018 4:29:00 PM
This is sorrowful..heartfelt...deep..dark..as life sometimes tends to be. Loss of someone near and dear devastates.. as you so aptly describe. Best for a win, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/23/2018 4:39:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I hope it fits the theme as she wants it to be. It is what it is. I appreciate your comment :)

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