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The Whispers of Diamonds and Moonstone

The whispers of diamonds and moonstone, Starlight’s infusion of butterfly wings. Flutter of lady’s eyelashes in Spring. Lullaby murmuring - Jane’s not alone. Sweet puff of air, rustle of lilting voice. The whispers of diamonds and moonstone, Shuffle from ear to ear, play telephone. Host’s sunrise hair - the inkling day’s rejoice. Sotto voce of floating flutes. Daydream Of droplets barely spritzing window-zone. The whispers of diamonds and moonstone, Reflection of lone eyes, glimmering stream. Undertone of Autumnal leaves, strewn, sown. Olive, lemon, plum - radiant and hushed. Silent lips of a second chance, not rushed - The whispers of diamonds and moonstone, 7/17/2021 Whispers Sponsor: John Lawless *HMS used - 10 syllables per line with two exceptions - diamonds (2 syllables instead of my variant 3 syllables) Sotto Voce (3 syllables. Should be 4)

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Paige Hind

Date: 8/17/2024 7:54:00 PM

Wonderful writing, dear Kim. Absolutely wonderful. <3 "radiant and hushed. Silent lips of a second chance, not rushed"

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/18/2024 4:22:00 PM

Thank you, Paige!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/26/2021 8:51:00 PM

I was going to highlight my favorite parts, but I soon discovered they were all my favorite parts, so I just popped it onto my FAVE list instead.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2021 4:52:00 AM

Thank you so much, sweet friend!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/18/2021 9:31:00 PM

A breathtakingly lovely creation, Kim. Host's sunrise hair - the inkling day's rejoice. Such imagery! This is in my faves. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2021 4:53:00 AM

Thank you so much, sweet friend!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/18/2021 5:50:00 PM

A gorgeous quatern, Kim, elegant and beautifully done! Every word exquisite and well placed.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2021 8:26:00 PM

That means a lot! xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/18/2021 6:52:00 AM

Beautifully done my friend. Diamonds and moonstones in visions of daydreams and images of spring. I hear the whispers you conveyed, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2021 5:27:00 PM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Supraja Kannan

Date: 7/18/2021 4:58:00 AM

Brilliant one for the contest... Lovely imagery...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2021 5:56:00 AM

Thank you, Supraja!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/17/2021 9:59:00 PM

Excellent poem, dear Kim. I think you hit the bull's eye. Reading my poor specimen I wonder if I should withdraw it. I bet you'll get first placing. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2021 4:06:00 AM

Thank you, my friend! Hugs ~

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/17/2021 3:30:00 PM

This is so beautiful.. poetry at its finest. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2021 5:26:00 PM

Bless you, Gina! <3

Barbara Peckham

Date: 7/17/2021 2:03:00 PM

Beautifully written. Form is perfect, and allusions to spring ring true. I love that line "Whispers of diamonds and moonstone", also "silent lips of a second chance, not rushed".

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2021 2:08:00 PM

Thank you, Barbara! Hugs ~