The Whirlwind In Collaboration With Nina Parmenter

I was completely, utterly, totally completely in love.
We met last Thursday, our eyes melted into each other’s souls before we spoke.
Together we were beyond sensual, beyond sexy, beyond anything I have experienced before.
There are no words to do our relationship justice.
 
I had fallen hard and fast, and it felt wonderful.
He was all about me, and I was all about us, and then he was too.
By Friday evening we were so in sync, we were finishing each other sentences.
I felt like I had been caught in a whirlwind, and I did not care.
We were nuts about each other, could not keep our hands off each other.
 
I could not wait to introduce him to my family and my friends
As he had become my world, and I had become his.
 
By Sunday, I knew him. 
I didn’t just know him, I KNEW him - possibly better than I knew myself.
It felt like, in the space of four days, we’d been together for - oh - about seven years.

Itch itch itch.

His stories became boring. I knew every ending.
His jokes became tedious. I knew every punchline.
And his body - oh how I had feasted on that body - every single pore....
It had nothing more to give.

On Monday morning, I looked at him and he looked at me.
“Shall we...” I said, “Call it a day?” he said.
So we split the chocolate we’d bought on Saturday but were too  lovesick to eat,
And we split the seedlings we’d bought to plant in the garden of our inevitable dream cottage...
And by Tuesday I was...
Over it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/25/2018 10:32:00 PM
Returning with congratulations for you both, Caren and Nina, on your excellent and well deserving POTD honors for your brilliant collaboration.. Warmest wishes my friends.. ~Susan
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/26/2018 7:07:00 AM
We had so much fun with this! This was a great surprise for us, and icing on the cake, Susan.
Date: 7/25/2018 8:21:00 PM
Wow! Hi Caren, I really enjoyed reading this fabulous write again. You all captured the "whirlwind" romance feeling in spades. I hated to see it end and I enjoyed the ride. Congratulations to you both for getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. PS, I hope to see you soon:-) Alexis
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/25/2018 9:21:00 PM
We had a blast doing this, the fun was in the making and the playing with another poet. Nina is delightful to "play with". I strongly recommend her to everyone!
Date: 7/25/2018 1:50:00 AM
Congratulations Caren and to Nina on POTD. Tom
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/25/2018 6:09:00 AM
Hahahaha! I had no idea, but what a wonderful post to wake up to on a gloriously fine Wednesday! Thanks Tom.
Date: 7/23/2018 9:56:00 PM
WOW! Even better with the second read. I love love love this fantastic, flowing and fun write. A superb collaboration Caren and Nina and a fav! Excellent, witty and so enjoyed! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/23/2018 10:06:00 PM
Thank you Susan. We have had fun with if for sure! It is really great to collaborate!
Date: 7/23/2018 5:41:00 PM
a hilarious story, so well told! kudos to the both of you. i enjoyed very much...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/23/2018 5:59:00 PM
Thank you. We like doing this together sometimes. It adds an element of fun and surprise.
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