The Wheel Has Come Full Circle

What goes up must come down. 
No colors can define who you are. 
You may own a cart or limousine. 
We'll still reach the end when it is near. 
I may be poor today and eat from trash. 
Tomorrow, you can't tell. I'll earn some cash. 
The bed where you lie is soft and wide. 
I sleep at a sidewalk and the stars are my lamp. 
You wake up each morn' with a feast on your table 
While we are scavenging to fill stomachs when we're able. 
Our destiny isn't written in the stars. 
We work for a living to thrive in this life. 
Be thankful every morning you witness the sun 
And pray tonight that no one lives same as I. 
Wheels come in full circle,rolling round and round. 
Today you'll be on top, 
I am watching from the ground. 
Let us bear in our minds that we are better than birds. 
Our loving Father ensures each mouth is fed. 
Not even the smallest details can pass by His eyes. 
So plant a seed of kindness and reap a better life. 



sponsor:FRANK H.

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contest: SHAKESPEARE

*5th Place winner
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February 16, 2017 at 10:41 AM
Great poem. If you don't mind me asking what influenced you to write this poem and also did imagery help you with this poem? If it did may I know why. (:
Makama Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 8:14 AM
Lovely, great and exquisite.. Your expressions are already longing for a permanent stay in my head. I will definitely come visiting again, but for the main time, a 7 rating is exactly what you deserve.
Gist Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 6:18 PM
Powerful but what comes with power must be restrained from line to line. What I mean is do not attack the reader in every line. Hold back a little bit then from time to time use your power. You can do this by altering your syllable count in each line as well as breaking up each set of thoughts into stanzas. Other than this, I feel you!
Timperley Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 11:39 AM
We can only live the life we have, but we do it to the best of our ability and karma really does happen. Great write, I love it. God Bless. D.
Nunez Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 12:24 AM
Wow...impressive work, Aiyah. Indeed, we are significant. Galing! Go Pinoy!
Sergi Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 7:33 AM
A very poignant poem,Aiyah. Sadly, many folks are worst off than us. Your basic needs should not be taken for granted.
Mcunu Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 1:41 AM
Nice words, keep up the great work
Devnath  Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 12:56 AM
Beautiful poem of comparison done beautifully. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
Karim Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 12:49 AM
You are a Poetess Aiyah! You are a good writer too. I enjoyed.
Spagnola Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 12:26 AM
Comparable to the Everlast, ~ What it's Like ~ in poetry + extra awesome! Well deserving of your ranking :), jill
Mcleod Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 11:35 PM
There is so much that is good in this poem, that I wish it could be refined with consistent meter and rhyme. It is begging to be a traditional poem. I like it Dr Neil Stewart McLeod
Rockwell Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 8:53 PM
Very nicely done! Your metaphors are excellent and your message uplifting! Thank you!
Price Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 7:07 PM
These verses transcend time and place. Hope is a universal concept.
Clark Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 4:19 PM
Excellent and full of heart and understanding - thank you for this piece!
Nunez Avatar
June 26, 2015 at 2:59 AM
Beautiful mind wrote this. Loved it. Happy birthday Aiyah! hugs!
Christian Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 11:24 AM
A great write, You will reap your harvest Even if U give a glass of water to the least you will be blessed
Williams Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 11:06 AM
It is good that you won. The poem is superb and I appreciate it.
Michael Tanjang Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 3:24 PM
wow!!!!!! shows that i will work harder miss, this one is so mesmerising and breathtaking keep up. congrats
Guzzi Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 4:06 PM
A valuable lesson and such perfect English! Light & Love
Lindley Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 9:42 AM
This is pure gold!!!! A basket of diamonds heaped upon a mountain of rubies and emeralds... You have a great gift, keep it alive and thriving!!!!!!
Bourne Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 1:08 AM
The motif of your Free Verse is consistent and well thought out. An enjoyable read......Thanks....Gene.
Chutani Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 12:37 PM
Aiyah, you put it very well-up and down is part of life-no one knows the morrow-my poem 'Crossroads' is on similar lines. Best, Mohan
Mutindi Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 7:08 AM
Well said no one knows how tomorrow will unfold. Great poem.
Torres Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 9:32 AM
Thanks a lot, Grace!!!
Shiells Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 9:43 PM
Aiyah My friend wanted to stop by and say hello to you and found this. WOW This spoke volumes and volumes. Excellent write. Thank you so much for sharing this write with us. Love and Peace, Deborah
Torres Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 5:38 PM
thank you so much for this wonderful comment my dear friend, Deb!! :O))
Onclaud Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 2:03 AM
heavenly composed, dear aiyah.. you are on a roll.. big clap for the pinoys and congrats.. huggs!
Torres Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 11:48 AM
Yeah nette... I'm proud to be Pinoy.. proud to be Pinoysouper!!! hehe.. Thanks a lot dear Friend!! :O))
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