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THE WEIGHT OF WAITING

poem written for an online poetry contest in response to the above image

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The clock’s hands carve circles into the air, but time does not move. I sit at the edge of a chair that remembers the shape of someone else’s body. Outside, a car engine stutters, then dies~ not mine. The phone is a black mirror. I stare until my face dissolves. A fly lands on my wrist, its legs like tiny prayers, but I do not flinch. The sun bleaches the curtains white. Shadows grow teeth. Still, nothing arrives. Somewhere, a train is late. Somewhere, a door stays shut. Here, I become the waiting.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2026 at 2:52 PM
intense ~
Rolland Avatar
February 28, 2026 at 3:50 PM
so emotional poetry, waiting something we don't know is hard have a nice sunday
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