The Weight of the World

written on his face
woes he carries like Atlas ~
a beast of burden



Date written: 01/23/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Allison Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 2:26 PM
superb senryu so descriptive Edward, a little gem:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 2:30 PM
Thank you so much, Jan:-)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Spectacularku.
Ibeh Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 1:55 PM
Thank you, Maureen!:-)
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