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let go

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The Weight of Letting Go

The things left unsaid
grow heavier through the years,
gathering below
like silt in a riverbed
fills in the refection pool.

Snowball, small at first,
gathers more snow as it rolls.
snowman's tiny nose,
becomes head, then a body,
then a roaring avalanche.

Regrets germinate
as roots grow into the soul
become embedded.
what was 'too few to mention'
is now 'too much to ignore'

Hand touches lightly
then tightens for better grip,
as the wanting grows.
the weight becomes the burden
that is so hard to let go.

Fingers on the ledge
numb and trembling from the strain,
grow inflexible
letting go is now so hard
after all the holding on.
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June 8, 2026 at 11:34 PM
Such sad imagery. Strengthened by your song.
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