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The Weight of Guilt

Guilt is a heavy load 
     A conscience can only carry
                  For so long
      Before it collapses under 
     It's unwieldy encumbrance
       A pressure on the lungs
     Pushing out air, threatening 
    To smother and deflate them
          Completely of oxygen


Date written and posted: 11/10/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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La France Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Edward, guilt is a killer for sure, best to let it go, great write, well done ~
Ibeh Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 7:22 PM
Thank you so much, Constance!:-) Most appreciated.
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