The Weight of a Smile

steps
passing by the road 
sometimes avoiding 
you

shadows
hold their breaths 

gazes
slide
like rain
over cold asphalt

the air
hangs
still

between your chest
and the world

echoes
forgets their way

and yet,
in a corner
forgotten by time,

someone
a stranger
or a  stray

smiles at you
honestly

and that
weighs
as much as all the roads
where
no one
has ever set foot
before.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 11:08 AM
Hello Florin, a beautiful poem you created. Hugs. /Darlene/
Lacatus Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 9:39 PM
Thank you so much, beautiful lady! Many hugs from Amsterdam!
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