The Weeping Willow

it looks like an old she
a witch maybe
her clothes 
tattered
look like thin reed threads
hanging down
all around
her frail bent body
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Poet Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 11:05 AM
I am getting the perfect image here.Love this one.
Alumbugu Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 6:15 AM
Short but potent. Good work!
Masido Avatar
January 9, 2012 at 7:35 AM
thanks Esson!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace