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The Wedding Shoes

I  recall the day we put on our brand new shoes,
yours were smooth dark leather and mine white heels;
          after we said I do we walked those shoes out of the church,
at the reception we danced our first dance and all the ones after that.

     The best part for me was later when we went for a stroll,
you and me and our shoes alone by the deep blue sea finally married;
          on the sand we removed our shoes and walked barefoot,
and finally we lay together under the stars and the moon.

     Walking back you picked me up and swung me around,
my white shoes had wings and you were like a mighty forest tree;
          your shoes firm on the ground-   I never felt so save in my life,
I still have your wedding shoes my darling, I  keep them on a shelve.

     I never imagined you would be but a name engraved . . .

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July 26, 2017

Verse/The Wedding Shoes
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Daniel Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 9:06 AM
A sweet poem that ends on a sad note, good work, Constance:)
Roper Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 8:00 PM
This is beautiful and so heartbreaking,, Constance... luck in the contest .. Hugs
Allison Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 4:51 PM
Oh Constance what a heartbreaking poem ... I am sure you treasure the shoes along with the precious memories of your beloved:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Kiser Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 3:45 AM
Gave me a slight shiver at the end; great imagery here.
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 3:20 PM
oh dang, I wanted to see what you had written!!! how are you today, sweetie? Let me go see if I can find another new one of yours to read.
La France Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 7:47 PM
Sorry Andrea it took me awhile to write hope you can come back
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