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The Wedding

soft steps in the sand
naked feet and formal dress
macaws serenade
azure water comes ashore
kisses under the palm trees

weddingtanka

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Peggy Caulfield

June 27, 2012 at 4:39 PM

Very romantic picturesque poem. It must have been a beautiful wedding.

Poet Destroyer A

June 24, 2012 at 6:13 PM

Victoria, nice tanak... thanks for sharing your poem, always~PD

Victoria Oliver

June 24, 2012 at 6:54 PM

Thanks for your feedback! That was my son's wedding, at a resort close to Cancun, Mexico. It was strange to see the bride in her beautiful gown, and bare feet! Oh, well. The bride and all the attendants looked lovely. As for my son, he and Stephanie had the idea that a nice long full beard would look great. grrr....