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The Weathervane

a weathervane still points east 'pon gray ancient barn... fall's air rust tractors the vain weathervane speaks east and rust grows though no one knows rusty John Deere sits outside engine deep in grass... bucks face off for fight the leaves are falling revealing the trees fractures fall air thrust factors crimson, gold, and red leaves fall farm lake ~ mural of the scene John Deere the artist tractors in the grass like clouds wearing the weather Rengay Collaboration between John Loving III and Sara Kendrick Sara's 1, 3, 5 John Loving III...2, 4, 6

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/19/2013 8:08:00 AM
Great collaborative work... Terry
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Date: 12/7/2013 5:05:00 PM
You two collaborated beautiful... The imagery I've seen in the country from times past... Memories... Ahhh...
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Date: 11/4/2013 3:54:00 PM
I've just added an extra slot for you
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Date: 11/2/2013 6:50:00 PM
this is an excellent collab from you both; I like everything about it: the mood, the tone, the colours, that last line especially - "like clouds/wearing the weather" - how did you come up with that?
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