The Weakness of Love

As out the window I saw him, and without asking permission
I fell in love with him,
The butterflies of my heart fluttered, 
My conscious disappeared in the deep shadows of his mystery
My heart melted on the flames of lust with blowing winds of fears
My soul filled with so much darkness so much cold,
I became a wayfarer wandering the lands,
Tracing the crumbs of his existing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Elkhiam Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 9:59 AM
I liked the way this poem shifted almost over the feelings spectrum..
Lamoureux Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 2:21 PM
a very sad and beautiful piece.
Hyler Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 10:37 AM
Thank you for sharing :) It touched my heart
Andresen Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 7:38 AM
- Touching, but well written Nadia ! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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