The Way You Make Me Feel

We haven’t been together that long
But my feelings for you are strong.
I love the way you make me smile 
When you look into my eyes,
The feelings I get when we lay side by side.
I love it when we play fight cause deep down 
Inside I know you will never hurt met.
I love the way our bodies touch and the 
Softness of your lips when they touch mine.
I love almost everything about you.
I really love that you are willing to 
Change the things I don’t like.
When we depart each other my joy quickly 
Goes away and I begin to count the days 
When we see each other again.
I know I may not show my feelings for you
The way you want but baby believe me,
They are there and I truly care.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 12:36 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Sharika. Love, Carol
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June 19, 2012 at 1:41 PM
Thanks
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June 6, 2012 at 5:28 AM
This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.
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June 7, 2012 at 12:22 PM
Thanks So Much. && Yes I Will Post More Today :)
Brown Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 12:03 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets Sharika. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
Sellman Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 12:23 PM
Thank You So Much & Thanks For Reading My Poem :)
Britt Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 8:49 PM
You both deserve each other! Welcome to Poetry Soup Sharika <3
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June 7, 2012 at 12:24 PM
Thanks <3
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June 4, 2012 at 1:46 PM
Sharika, ,, I like the deep thoughts your poem inspired in me! Thank you for sharing your awesome write :-) PD
Sellman Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 12:24 PM
Thanks Im Glad You Liked My Poem :)
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June 3, 2012 at 7:44 PM
Lovely poem to your boyfriend!!
Sellman Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 12:24 PM
Thanks :)
Palmer Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 3:47 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup,lovely poem to a lucky guy
Sellman Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 12:25 PM
Thanks :)
Andresen Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 3:20 PM
Sharika, this is a lovely and well written poem - like it! - Have a nice new week to you. - oxox Anne-Lise
Sellman Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 3:47 PM
Thank You So Much :)
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June 3, 2012 at 3:40 PM
PS. Welcome to P-Soup !!!
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