Get Your Premium Membership

The Way Uphill is Paved

The way uphill is paved With Winter white and cherry lips; Silver wings filigree-engraved, Runners’ serpentine-slips. With Winter white and cherry lips, Calmness after the blizzard winds. Runners’ serpentine slips. A child’s whim, hallelujah hymns. Calmness after the blizzard winds. The landscape, a breath of fresh air. A child’s whim, hallelujah hymns. Imprint of angel’s fair. The landscape, a breath of fresh air, Silver wings filigree-engraved - Imprint of angel’s fair. The way uphill is paved.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/7/2025 4:11:00 PM
Indeed...we are most grateful for the those who have gone before us and paved us a road, especially the footprints of Jesus! Enjoyed so much, thank you. Love, Blessings and Faith...
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2025 5:57:00 AM
Your blessings and faith, blesses me! Thank you so much, Joyce!
Date: 2/6/2025 8:08:00 PM
Really lovely- "Calmness after the blizzard winds"
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2025 3:42:00 AM
Yes! Inspired by a painting. Hugs!
Date: 1/31/2025 12:47:00 PM
I like this one and the carry through lines. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2025 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Date: 1/30/2025 12:40:00 PM
Beautiful poem, it sounds like a child's joyful run uphill after a snowstorm and making angels.
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2025 1:09:00 PM
Thank you, David!
Date: 1/30/2025 2:26:00 AM
so beautifully written , your poem touched me, thanks poet for the enjoyable moment
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2025 8:39:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words!
Date: 1/29/2025 4:28:00 PM
the pantoum form is so challenging Kim, the imagery and flow of your poem is delightful:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2025 6:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! :)

Book: Reflection on the Important Things