The Way Uphill is Paved

The way uphill is paved With Winter white and cherry lips; Silver wings filigree-engraved, Runners’ serpentine-slips. With Winter white and cherry lips, Calmness after the blizzard winds. Runners’ serpentine slips. A child’s whim, hallelujah hymns. Calmness after the blizzard winds. The landscape, a breath of fresh air. A child’s whim, hallelujah hymns. Imprint of angel’s fair. The landscape, a breath of fresh air, Silver wings filigree-engraved - Imprint of angel’s fair. The way uphill is paved.
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Date: 2/7/2025 4:11:00 PM
Indeed...we are most grateful for the those who have gone before us and paved us a road, especially the footprints of Jesus! Enjoyed so much, thank you. Love, Blessings and Faith...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2025 5:57:00 AM
Your blessings and faith, blesses me! Thank you so much, Joyce!
Date: 2/6/2025 8:08:00 PM
Really lovely- "Calmness after the blizzard winds"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2025 3:42:00 AM
Yes! Inspired by a painting. Hugs!
Date: 1/31/2025 12:47:00 PM
I like this one and the carry through lines. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2025 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Date: 1/30/2025 12:40:00 PM
Beautiful poem, it sounds like a child's joyful run uphill after a snowstorm and making angels.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2025 1:09:00 PM
Thank you, David!
Date: 1/30/2025 2:26:00 AM
so beautifully written , your poem touched me, thanks poet for the enjoyable moment
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2025 8:39:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words!
Date: 1/29/2025 4:28:00 PM
the pantoum form is so challenging Kim, the imagery and flow of your poem is delightful:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2025 6:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! :)
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