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The Way I See It

My world is a dream Infinitely fake, a nightmare! All my struggle and worry It's all pointless, I suffer alone. This expectation of a Champagne and Caviar lifestyle Will remain an illusion, An emotional glimpse of Tarnished portraits are evidence That insecurity is an extraordinary breakdown of a persons Psychological determination.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2013 9:06:00 AM

Michelle, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Glad to see you among the poets on the soups front page. Love your wonderful verse. Have your self a nice & beautiful Sunday... ~PD

Elizabeth Jubenville

Date: 12/6/2012 9:38:00 AM

How about stop expecting and just take life in your hands and built your own castle. Sometimes it is tough, but remember, after the storm sun will rise. We do forget the strength we have, and don’t ever give up. Nice poem , enjoy the day, and smile:) Ellie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/6/2012 5:54:00 AM

Hey Michelle, you write very well - I like your poem. - Will welcome you to the P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Read ... give and receive comments on what you and others write. - I've been a member for a year now, enjoying myself with this page. - It's always nice to get new members. - Have a nice day. - Greeting from "winter Norway" and Anne-Lise :)