The Wax In a Candle

Take the wick of a candle, and give it a light. You can see where you walk through the darkness of night. Between myself and the candle, there is an analogy. What I see here is a striking similarity. Just like the wax, my life is melting away. I can no longer live like I did in an earlier day. My life is like the candle that is burning on. It's only a matter of time before I am gone.
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Mcconnell Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 11:20 AM
Great illustration portrayed here Robert, showing the link between the candle and our lifes. Great work indeed! Take care, Gordon
Buehler Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 8:28 PM
Your imagery here is wonderful, Robert. Elegantly wrought.
Bauer Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 2:12 PM
great analogy, robert! let's hope we have a lot more drips left in us...
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 12:06 PM
Clever poem, Robert ~
Rodrigues Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 10:13 AM
I’m feeling a bit waxy myself...drip drip drip...
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