The Waves

Windy night, grey skies
Waves go up so high
Sand and sea set free
Right here in front of me!

Rocks crumble under me
Like the heavens are falling
 Oh so gracefully
A masterpiece!

A storm grows more and more
and I adore...
The waves even more
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Chircop Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 2:41 AM
So beautifully described those waves and sea so free.
Vaso Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 6:50 PM
There is such beauty in these words Elana, you are a wonderful poet!
Smith Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 5:00 PM
A pretty picture you painted. Lovely poem.
Allison Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 3:50 PM
oh such beautiful strong imagery Elena - i live on a little Island so can relate to your poem so much:-) hugs jan xx
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