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I caught a glimpse of a sunrise. Pale magenta cast by the sun on gray skies The cool air of early morn seemed to be my prize. The creamy white blossoms on moon flower did apprise. I did not want to go back inside. Chores faced me there besides. Life should be more appealing. Like seeing the small things in life come alive The kitchen needed some cleaning. Breakfast needed my hand. If only it could be handled by screening Or by the wave of a magic fan

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Valsa George

Date: 9/26/2023 10:40:00 PM

This is exactly how I too feel. When I am lost in the beauty of nature, I don't want to go in when household chores pull me hard. Enjoyed reading your poem Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2023 6:24:00 AM

Glad I am not alone in my desire to spend more time soaking in nature. Thanks or your visit, Valsa. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 9/16/2023 2:22:00 PM

LOL, yes, if only we could all have a go with that magic fan

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/17/2023 4:02:00 AM

Jack, I know at times you wish for a magic fan or wand or a fairy to come do all your chores. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/13/2023 8:49:00 PM

Yes, the wave of a magic fan, akin to the wrinkle of a bewitched nose, giving the kitchen the back of your hand! Ole, gw

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/14/2023 7:40:00 AM

Yes, some days I feel like that, Gershon. Thanks for the visit and the nice review of my work. I wouldn't want to become a witch to get it done like that though. Sara

The Situation

Date: 9/12/2023 10:45:00 PM

I would call it "The calling of a House Wife"

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/13/2023 4:23:00 AM

TS, Yes, it could be the calling of a housewife. Sometimes I try to think that today I will not listen to the call. Your visit was inspiring. Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 9/12/2023 10:11:00 PM

I really love how you’ve written this, especially your opening lines “ pale magenta cast by the sun on grey skies” beautiful, and the ending is so good. Today i saw the sunrise too, usually love sunsets but sunrise too is stunning. How it reflects on the sea. Appreciating little things before we get on with other things, sometimes can make our day. Loved this

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/13/2023 4:22:00 AM

IE, Yes, just a few minutes saying thank you to God and nature can make our day. Thanks for dropping by, taking time to read and comment on my work. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/12/2023 6:40:00 AM

- Everything in its time, Sara ...but, enjoy this beautiful moment ... the kitchen can wait a bit ... lovely poem :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/12/2023 8:44:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise, for giving me permission to enjoy the early morning. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/12/2023 6:03:00 AM

Sara, the pale magenta cast on gray skies comes alive and beckons me . There is something sacred about the early morning before chores and breakfast . It is a time to appreciate the creamy white blossoms and the simple pleasures. Loved this ! Hugs, Susan :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/12/2023 8:44:00 AM

Why thank you, Susan. I appreciate the kind review of my work and the time spent here reading and commenting. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/12/2023 5:58:00 AM

Magenta sunrise--creamy white blossoms on moon flower. A sight that dreams are made of. No wonder you didn't want to go back in, yet. A lovely write, Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/12/2023 8:43:00 AM

Why, thank you, Vijay. I still don't want to go back even though it is heating up out there. The morning cool air would be fine with that fine foggy mist rising off the creek. Sara

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/12/2023 2:54:00 AM

Oh my, such a breathtaking sunrise inspired write this is dear.. I can definitely feel these emotions.. When nature's beauty makes us awestruck and we wish to hault in the moment and actually absorb its every essence within our heart's every cell.. "Pale magenta cast by the sun on gray skies", "the cool air of early morn seemed to be my prize" Definitely it is.. "The creamy white moonflower" Wow.. Purely magical :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/12/2023 3:07:00 AM

Why, thank you, Hiya. I like the smiley face. Your comments always encourage me. Sara