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The Wave

as i descend on to the water, in hopes i don't falter, as the water hits my face, in my mouth i can taste. rippling water in front of me, suddenly, i hit a wave, i can't see, down deep in to the water i go, down, down, oh so low.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/25/2008 6:07:00 AM
Better watch those waves James they can be tricky - Great poem - God Bless
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