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The Waters Way

From glacial mountain tops and peaks Sunlight wakes me from my sleep No way of telling how long I slept Or way of knowing what time is left Gravity takes me where I go Often times it’s just the flow Downward till death lets me go Ever traveling I do not know Waters they go where the force is leading The shallows and the deeps competing The secrets and gold I hide I feed and carry sources of life Flooding a place where stops my aim My being is both loss and gain And often called god or goddess Drying unto death stops my progress I sometimes quench the dying thirst Or being too much I slowly curse Dissolving structures when floods take hold Sweep away foundations the new and old Feed the flocks that feed a nation Filling the swamps or leaving hydration Douse the fires that would destroy Bathe the unclean that would annoy Joining the ocean the ultimate goal No more am I when salt takes hold From there rebirth gives me meaning Over and over always repeating

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Date: 8/29/2023 11:28:00 AM
A creative write. I enjoyed reading it. Have a great day.............
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Date: 8/27/2023 3:46:00 PM
I agree with Richard, a very interesting new creation. Certainly calls for the mid to seek the light of truth. God bless you.
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Date: 8/25/2023 2:34:00 PM
An interesting contemplative piece.
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Date: 8/25/2023 3:44:00 AM
Beautiful metaphorical Imagery .Genius
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Date: 8/24/2023 11:18:00 AM
Your poem, TS, is exquisitely written. Water, the life-giving force that sustains all living beings in the universe, is depicted with remarkable precision through your eloquent choice of words and vivid metaphors. The sheer artistry of your penmanship enhances the inherent beauty of your poem, creating a captivating masterpiece.
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Date: 8/24/2023 11:34:00 AM
I should send you the original so you can see how far it came from.

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