The Waters Way

From glacial mountain tops and peaks
Sunlight wakes me from my sleep
No way of telling how long I slept
Or way of knowing what time is left

Gravity takes me where I go
Often times it’s just the flow
Downward till death lets me go
Ever traveling I do not know

Waters they go where the force is leading
The shallows and the deeps competing
The secrets and gold I hide
I feed and carry sources of life

Flooding a place where stops my aim
My being is both loss and gain
And often called god or goddess
Drying unto death stops my progress

I sometimes quench the dying thirst
Or being too much I slowly curse
Dissolving structures when floods take hold
Sweep away foundations the new and old

Feed the flocks that feed a nation
Filling the swamps or leaving hydration
Douse the fires that would destroy 
Bathe the unclean that would annoy

Joining the ocean the ultimate goal
No more am I when salt takes hold
From there rebirth gives me meaning
Over and over always repeating

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Date: 8/29/2023 11:28:00 AM
A creative write. I enjoyed reading it. Have a great day.............
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Date: 8/27/2023 3:46:00 PM
I agree with Richard, a very interesting new creation. Certainly calls for the mid to seek the light of truth. God bless you.
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Date: 8/25/2023 2:34:00 PM
An interesting contemplative piece.
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Date: 8/25/2023 3:44:00 AM
Beautiful metaphorical Imagery .Genius
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Date: 8/24/2023 11:18:00 AM
Your poem, TS, is exquisitely written. Water, the life-giving force that sustains all living beings in the universe, is depicted with remarkable precision through your eloquent choice of words and vivid metaphors. The sheer artistry of your penmanship enhances the inherent beauty of your poem, creating a captivating masterpiece.
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Date: 8/24/2023 11:34:00 AM
I should send you the original so you can see how far it came from.
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