The Waters of Life

Plunge into the joyous waters of life. Nourish compassion with graceful fountains of love, replenished with caring. Bathe in the light of awareness. Drench your soul with spirit’s sense of peace. Shine forever, cleansed by raindrops of hope.
The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. The Etheree consists of ten lines of unmetered and unrhymed verse, the first line having one syllable, each succeeding line adding a syllable, with the total syllable count being fifty-five. This concise form is meant to focus on one idea or subject. You may use punctuation as needed. Articles (a, an, the) are limited to two. “The” used twice.

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Date: 6/19/2012 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Lucretia. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2012 1:04:00 PM
Yes this is awsome time well spent at the well..
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Date: 6/18/2012 8:17:00 AM
This is lovely - congratulations on your feature this week.
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Date: 6/16/2012 10:58:00 AM
beautiful arrangement. Like it. Well written .*smiles* ron
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Date: 6/14/2012 11:52:00 PM
This is UTTERLY ENCHANTING!!!PLEEEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!!!
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Date: 5/18/2012 9:26:00 AM
Thank you all for the warm welcome to PoetrySoup. I look forward to meeting you all and posting my poetry. (I hope I'm answering your posts right!) Lots to learn to navigate my way around. I look forward to reading and enjoying this site. Lucretia xx
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Date: 5/18/2012 4:58:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lucretia. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/14/2012 7:06:00 AM
it was nice stopping by to read you poem today.....keep the good work up..and welcome to poetry soup
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Date: 5/12/2012 11:22:00 PM
Welcome. Beautiful poem. enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 5/12/2012 6:42:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Lucretia, you have a beautiful poem here today. Hope you will write, read and comments back alot of poem here with us, have fun.Wish you a lovely weekend and sending you love from Norway and Anne-Lise - Hope to see you again.
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Date: 5/12/2012 6:27:00 AM
Beautifully written Etheree Pamela! Enjoyed reading.
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