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The Waterfall of Deceit

The water flowed down into the semi dark ravine
Where prolific verdant ferns adorned the shaded scene.
Low light cast a ghostly glow over the surroundings
Increasing the sensation of my heart heavy poundings.

It was our lonely meeting place, now full of throes.
Listen, the roar of the water gave me no repose.
Beneath the waterfall I stood feeling the slight breeze
Hoping the humid air, my wounded heart might appease.
A few restraint tears fell like the water down the cliff,
Despite the water spray I still felt rigid, angry and stiff.

Learn must I to let the water flow
And stop thinking of lost love, my woe.
Wearily I tread the cold water with bare feet
Hoping to find serenity in that river of deceit.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Roper Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 11:19 AM
Great imagery and the sad emotions. It is strange that after a loss we also get very angry because the lost one is gone. Hugs Eve
Jayasankar Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 8:50 AM
A poem so sad and emotive... Loved your ending couplets... specially.. 'to find serenity in that river of deceit'... God bless... ~ Ani
Daniel Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 6:11 AM
Sad and filled with dark longing, Victor, you have a fluent pen:)
Mcintosh Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 4:30 AM
Excellent verse and vision...almost like a song soothing the sorrows... God bless you always, Love, Gina
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 3:48 AM
Whoa!! Very emotive and revealing of lost love. I hope not your life but just a work about someone else's pain or maybe from long ago in your life. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
Horsman Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 7:02 PM
So wise the poetry, so sorrowful too, yet it strike this reader with such sincerity.
Kitchin Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 2:37 PM
Another great one Victor, love the imagery and the emotions!
Buehler Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Amidst the lovely, majestic scenery, sadness and the memory of loss is prevalent. Masterfully written, Victor. Best wishes, Evelyn
Merryman Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Excellent imagery and rhyme, Victor! Your words are emotive revealing sadness and disappointment. A wonderful poem! Blessings, Kim M
Pandit Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 5:48 AM
Always a beautiful journey through your poem, Victor-- though this one is a bit melancholy. Love the way you weave your words to let the poem speak boldly of the emotions it evokes.
Seeker Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 5:26 AM
that hollow, sinking feeling ~ the birds yet go on singing ~ we turn another page ~ upon the world stage ... Victor, you are responsible for my getting carried away! Beautiful poem!
Ricci Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 2:55 AM
Good Morning Victor - Your rhyming was wonderfully executed without force and your theme is lovely with soft reflective tones and a quiet voice. I very much enjoyed turning to your page. Thank you for sharing. Blessings always.
Poet Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 2:28 AM
Great poem, dear Victor; even though it's sad, it is necessary for survival, like you said in the last stanza. And this sorrow will raise your spirits, and you will comb the shore for seeps of water-filled pebbles. Have a great day, dearest Friend
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May 12, 2021 at 1:11 AM
- Lost love is hard to forget, Victor :) - A beautiful poem, with a taste of tears - Have a wonderful day, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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