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Lori Lucas Mcclure

The Waterfall

The smoke that thunders
                                         curtains of falling waters
                                         natures pounding heart

Copyright © Lori Lucas Mcclure | Year Posted 2014

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Pandita Sietesantos

July 4, 2015 at 1:10 AM

Beautiful haiku with amazing imagery! Love it. Pandita

May 18, 2014 at 11:39 AM

This is wonderful ;) strong imagery indeed!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

May 17, 2014 at 4:33 AM

HI LOri.. :) vivid imagery.. great write.. :), GBU olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

May 17, 2014 at 4:35 AM

KUDOS!

Connie Marcum Wong

May 16, 2014 at 10:20 PM

Congratulations on your win Lori. I enjoyed your vibrant imagery in this haiku.

May 16, 2014 at 9:16 PM

Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, Lori

May 16, 2014 at 11:29 AM

Love the feel..congrats

May 16, 2014 at 8:45 AM

Great descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read..Your comments on my work were uplifting..Sara

May 16, 2014 at 7:57 AM

Wow. I love your imagery "the smoke that thunders". Congrats Linda x

Andrea Dietrich

May 15, 2014 at 9:24 PM

A good symbolic one. congrats for your win.

Toquyen Harrell

May 7, 2014 at 11:54 PM

Beautiful! I can see it :)

Reason A. Poteet

May 7, 2014 at 10:46 AM

a clear image in my mind. Sight and sound and the hint of smell. Good one, Nyani, Nyani.

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