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The Waterfall

The smoke that thunders curtains of falling waters natures pounding heart

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/4/2015 1:10:00 AM

Beautiful haiku with amazing imagery! Love it. Pandita

Lily Twinkle

Date: 5/18/2014 11:39:00 AM

This is wonderful ;) strong imagery indeed!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/17/2014 4:33:00 AM

HI LOri.. :) vivid imagery.. great write.. :), GBU olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/17/2014 4:35:00 AM

KUDOS!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/16/2014 10:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Lori. I enjoyed your vibrant imagery in this haiku.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2014 9:16:00 PM

Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, Lori

David Mohn

Date: 5/16/2014 11:29:00 AM

Love the feel..congrats

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/16/2014 8:45:00 AM

Great descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read..Your comments on my work were uplifting..Sara

Linda Jackson

Date: 5/16/2014 7:57:00 AM

Wow. I love your imagery "the smoke that thunders". Congrats Linda x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2014 9:24:00 PM

A good symbolic one. congrats for your win.

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 5/7/2014 11:54:00 PM

Beautiful! I can see it :)

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/7/2014 10:46:00 AM

a clear image in my mind. Sight and sound and the hint of smell. Good one, Nyani, Nyani.