The Waterfall

natural staircase 
water forms moving carpet 
ushering nature
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 9:18 PM
Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, teddy
Kimathi Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 5:19 AM
I appreciate your applause and guidance in my writing skill Dr. Ram Mehta! :)
Jackson Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Congratulations, Linda x
Kimathi Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 5:18 AM
Thank you for your applause Linda!
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 7:54 AM
Congratulations on your win! lori
Kimathi Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 5:17 AM
Thank you Lori!
Halliday Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 10:13 PM
Nicely done
Kimathi Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 5:02 AM
Thank you Mark! :-)
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:28 PM
I like how you made this a metaphor. Congrats on your HM.
Kimathi Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 5:01 AM
Thanks so much for your applause Andrea! ^_^
Mehta Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 6:23 AM
Beautiful write with nice images. Please give once over to the syllable counts if it's for a contest. Teddy
Kimathi Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 7:06 AM
Oh, sorry for the name mishap. Thanks for checking on my poem Dr. Ram Mehta. I will revise it.
Kimathi Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 6:29 AM
Thanks Gerald! :)
Kithinji Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 5:29 AM
Liked that moving carpet...
Kimathi Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 7:03 AM
Thanks Gerald! :)
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