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The Waterfall

The river cascades over the falls to a beauteous pool that enthralls.

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Robert Pettit

Date: 2/12/2012 12:37:00 PM

It is difficult to write a crystalline with some descriptiveness due to its brevity. However, you have turned the trick here admirably.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2011 11:38:00 PM

love how you rhymed it , Francine, and I see it won big. Congratulations!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/6/2011 7:04:00 PM

Contratulations on the win in the contest,Francine

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 10:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in John Moses Freeman's "Crystalline Euphony" contest Francine. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2011 7:05:00 PM

Creative winning work...Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 9/5/2011 4:06:00 PM

Many congrats on all your wins, Francine : )

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/5/2011 2:51:00 PM

So happy to see your poem winning big-time in John's contest, Francine. Congratulations, dear. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 9/5/2011 10:11:00 AM

Congrats Francine on your 2nd place win...enjoyed this beauty.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/5/2011 7:39:00 AM

It is so nice to see this piece up high in the winners list.. congrats .... Michael

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/5/2011 7:14:00 AM

love this Francine especially your 2nd line, congratulations on your win in the contest :)

David Williams

Date: 9/5/2011 3:18:00 AM

hey Francine congrats on your win..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2011 3:00:00 AM

Congrats Francine on your wonderful win with this dynamic poetry so expressive from the gorgeous photo my friend.. amazing words...luv..

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/5/2011 1:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the Crystalline Euphony Contest by John Freeman. CR

John Freeman

Date: 9/5/2011 12:59:00 AM

Superb write Francine, Thanks...Congratulations on your worthy second place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/4/2011 2:55:00 PM

Francine, I have always loved the joy you find in nature. This is something we share and your poem is a beautiful entry for John's contest. Thanks for sharing it with us and you now I'm always wishing the best for you. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 9/4/2011 1:58:00 AM

Very good approach to the contest photo Francine.Best wishes.Thanks for your comment at my page.

Don Johnson

Date: 9/3/2011 7:43:00 PM

winter comes becomes ice balls, and sadda says he's got girth galls, not enthralled...heck

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/3/2011 6:19:00 PM

Pleasing to the mind's eye Francine. Good luck as John judges. CR