The Waterfall

The river cascades over the falls

   to a beauteous pool that enthralls.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 12:37 PM
It is difficult to write a crystalline with some descriptiveness due to its brevity. However, you have turned the trick here admirably.
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 11:38 PM
love how you rhymed it , Francine, and I see it won big. Congratulations!
Mehta Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 7:04 PM
Contratulations on the win in the contest,Francine
Brown Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 10:07 AM
Congratulations on your placement in John Moses Freeman's "Crystalline Euphony" contest Francine. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 7:05 PM
Creative winning work...Sara
Horne Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 4:06 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Francine : )
Devonshire Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 2:51 PM
So happy to see your poem winning big-time in John's contest, Francine. Congratulations, dear. Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Congrats Francine on your 2nd place win...enjoyed this beauty.
Falotico Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 7:39 AM
It is so nice to see this piece up high in the winners list.. congrats .... Michael
Neels Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 7:14 AM
love this Francine especially your 2nd line, congratulations on your win in the contest :)
Williams Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 3:18 AM
hey Francine congrats on your win..David
Sweetheart Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 3:00 AM
Congrats Francine on your wonderful win with this dynamic poetry so expressive from the gorgeous photo my friend.. amazing words...luv..
Ramsdale Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 1:34 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the Crystalline Euphony Contest by John Freeman. CR
Freeman Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 12:59 AM
Superb write Francine, Thanks...Congratulations on your worthy second place. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 2:55 PM
Francine, I have always loved the joy you find in nature. This is something we share and your poem is a beautiful entry for John's contest. Thanks for sharing it with us and you now I'm always wishing the best for you. Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 1:58 AM
Very good approach to the contest photo Francine.Best wishes.Thanks for your comment at my page.
Johnson Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 7:43 PM
winter comes becomes ice balls, and sadda says he's got girth galls, not enthralled...heck
Ramsdale Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 6:19 PM
Pleasing to the mind's eye Francine. Good luck as John judges. CR
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