The Water, the Wave and the Flame

Based on Portrait No. 1, Blue and Green Music by Georgia O'Keeffe 1921

THE WATER, THE WAVE AND THE FLAME (Edited by Debbie Guzzi)

Against the wave, the flames, 
I rise high. I run deep. 
My amplitude expresses me; 
I clash against the rocks. 
Strong and powerful, I am, 
Just because, because, I am equation. 

I am tall. I am firm. 
My mortar expresses me. 
I support the sky. 
Strong and powerful, I am. 
Just because, because, I am foundation. 

I soar wide. I am profound. 
My glow expresses me; 
I flash against the wind. 
Strong and powerful, I am. 
Just because, because, I am radiant. 

As one, we are strong, together stronger: 
the water, the wall, and the flame.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/23/2016 9:11:00 PM
JEANETTE:) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/15/2016 8:42:00 PM
Wow...great use of the elements in your write, Jeanette. PS. Sorry for the late visit... on to your other writes...Kim
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Date: 1/10/2016 11:27:00 PM
This has a nice flow to it, good job!
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Jeanette Jones
Date: 1/12/2016 6:44:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 1/10/2016 10:08:00 PM
Good Jeanette now get the others up too :) Light & Love
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