The Water, the Wave and the Flame

Based on Portrait No. 1, Blue and Green Music by Georgia O'Keeffe 1921

THE WATER, THE WAVE AND THE FLAME (Edited by Debbie Guzzi)

Against the wave, the flames, 
I rise high. I run deep. 
My amplitude expresses me; 
I clash against the rocks. 
Strong and powerful, I am, 
Just because, because, I am equation. 

I am tall. I am firm. 
My mortar expresses me. 
I support the sky. 
Strong and powerful, I am. 
Just because, because, I am foundation. 

I soar wide. I am profound. 
My glow expresses me; 
I flash against the wind. 
Strong and powerful, I am. 
Just because, because, I am radiant. 

As one, we are strong, together stronger: 
the water, the wall, and the flame.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 23, 2016 at 9:11 PM
JEANETTE:) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT~
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January 15, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Wow...great use of the elements in your write, Jeanette. PS. Sorry for the late visit... on to your other writes...Kim
Drag Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 11:27 PM
This has a nice flow to it, good job!
Jones Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 6:44 PM
Thank you.
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January 10, 2016 at 10:08 PM
Good Jeanette now get the others up too :) Light & Love
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