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The first visible ray of sunshine Is snatched from the unyielding sky Murky waves lurking in a single line Turns the tide in a significant way. Hymns are sung to the melody of water Bedlam with elapsed goals and dreams The cloak is the tackle of rhyme matter Repeatedly downrush freely at the seams. The cliff is painted by the morning light Also, the stones there are truly talkative A calamity that was merely sketched right For ancestor's bones, there's no alternative. Word conflicts hump my tongue twitch So I'll never be able to satisfy my hunger Notably, when one has multiple switches Blowback with a clap of fury and thunder. The pen in my grip has me feel like a judge with no verse left to the whims of chance If I'm the blaze, no one can hold a grudge Indeed, I was conceived for a floor dance.
Written: April 28, 2023

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Date: 4/29/2023 7:56:00 AM
Interesting lines penned. Creative for sure. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 4/28/2023 11:52:00 PM
A picture of serenity and calm you have sketched through soothing images and striking words. 'Hyms sung to the melody of water' early in the morning and cliffs painted in early light. I can visualize this scene ! Wonderful as ever.
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Date: 4/28/2023 7:24:00 PM
such a lovely penning, nature is isnpiring and solacing, wonderful ending
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Date: 4/28/2023 11:31:00 AM
Hi Lasaad, You penned a lovely and melodic "water" song. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day and weekend;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/28/2023 8:36:00 AM
"Hymns are sung to the melody of water" indeed they are, Sotto. A very good calming poem this morning. I enjoyed reading your thoughts this morning. Have a wonderful weekend my friend.
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Date: 4/28/2023 5:33:00 AM
A comforting water song my friend. Soothing missives you convey.
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Date: 4/28/2023 1:07:00 AM
Deep and lovely, Sotto:)
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Date: 4/28/2023 12:23:00 AM
A tranquil picture painted in words Sotto, most definitely a lovely read first thing this morning….Belle
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