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The Water Fountains

People are drawn to the water fountains Water fountains are all different They are round, square,oval short Yet a crowd always gathers here Someone holds a coin-makes a wish Then throws the coins-into the fountain Hoping that their wishes made comes true The fountain filled with coins No one knows which coin the fountain will bless Only the fountain knows which coin will be blessed So people hope that it will be theirs. Yet only one coin is blessed.

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Date: 1/12/2020 5:18:00 PM
Thanks for the tip, Darlene. Never knew that only one coin is blessed. Thank you, Gershon
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/12/2020 7:44:00 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, Yes one coin can be blessed. Thank yoely comment. have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 12/23/2019 9:05:00 PM
as a child we had one in the mall that changes colors...i remember throwing coins in it all the time and walking around the ledge of it... thanks for bringing the memories back :) hugs
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Date: 12/24/2019 8:04:00 AM
Hello Sandra Adams, Oh I remember that as well. We had those tin the mall as well. to. People did throw money into the water. It does bring back a memory. Thank you for bring it back. Merry Christmas. Hugs Darlene
Date: 12/23/2019 7:59:00 AM
NICE TO THINK ABOUT, NICE TO READ TOO...I IMAGINED ALL COINS WOULD BE BLESSED...!SOMEDAY I WILL CAST 3 COINS WITH TOTAL HOPE... KISSES MY DEAREST SALUTE ALKAS
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Date: 12/23/2019 11:39:00 AM
Hello Alkas Poetry, thank you for the lovely comment. I will do the same as you. One of our coins should be blessed.Salute Darlene. Merry Christmas.
Date: 12/21/2019 10:48:00 AM
Nice penning Darlene, well thought out piece with good imagery.
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Date: 12/21/2019 4:56:00 PM
Hello Gordon McConnell, thank you for the lovely comment. Merry Christmas. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 12/21/2019 7:39:00 AM
I have always liked water fountains. It was really cool to see them dancing away to music and light. Nicely done.
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Date: 12/21/2019 4:58:00 PM
Hello Bette Bavington, I like water fountains to. People always put a coin into a water fountain and make wishes. Thank you for the lovely comment. Merry Christmas. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 12/19/2019 9:47:00 PM
We all hope for the best of luck. I play the lottery fairly regularly. Hope your coin is the blessed one. As for my poem I just meant that it is nicer to read a good book than law books and Tom Sawyer is a good book. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/20/2019 10:08:00 AM
Hello Matthew Anish, I use to watch Tom Sawyer's on tv. I enjoyed the programme. It was like taking a little adventure with him. Peace and Love Darlene
Date: 12/18/2019 5:38:00 PM
We place our hopes in them and often they make us feel better. Toss a coin, make a wish, hope ? Very nicely done dear Darlene, Thanks for sharing,
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Date: 12/19/2019 7:46:00 AM
Hello Pixie,yes people make wishes when at the fountains. No one knows which coin will be blessed. Your welcome. Merry Christmas. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 12/18/2019 1:37:00 PM
I love a water fountain Darlene, they are so relaxing to listen to. Tom
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Date: 12/19/2019 7:50:00 AM
Hello Tom Cunningham, I like them to, yes they are relaxing to listen to. Merry Christmas. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 12/17/2019 2:46:00 PM
Lovely words, lots of imagery... I read it twice... I so enjoyed it... Fav.... Ann
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Date: 12/18/2019 10:26:00 AM
Hello Ann Foster,I am pleased you enjoyed this poem. Thank you for making it your fav. Merry Christmas.Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 12/17/2019 8:27:00 AM
Gee, I haven't seen a fountain in the longest time. Thanks for reminding me, my friend! Panagiota
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Date: 12/17/2019 11:47:00 AM
Hello Pattie, I have not seen them for the longest time. I have noticed that every fountain I have seen has a statue. People put cons water and make a wish. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs Darlene
Date: 12/16/2019 4:09:00 PM
Amazing group of words. Kudos on your knack in writing. Merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/17/2019 7:09:00 AM
Hello Cecilia Cortez, hi! Thank you for the locely comment. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 12/16/2019 3:28:00 PM
Indeed a very good poem. Thanks for sharing Darlene
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Date: 12/17/2019 7:13:00 AM
Hello Gregory Paul, Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 12/16/2019 2:53:00 PM
Nice Darlene
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Date: 12/17/2019 7:14:00 AM
Hello Timothy McGuire,Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 12/16/2019 2:04:00 PM
- Just the one ... that I did not know - They are beautiful to look at :) - A lovely poem, Darlene :) - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/17/2019 7:18:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, Thank you for the lovely comment. Blue jays are beautiful birds. Wishing you the best Christmas ever. Hugs Darlene

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