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The Water Flows

In the valley's green forest sprawl There runs a stream and waterfall I'm often drawn there to feel free Water flows and nourishes me Hidden under the treetop weaves Bordered by ferns and mossy leaves Cool water soothes my energy Water flows and nourishes me I sit quiet and watch it drift Constantly moving and shape shift Moulding itself round rock and tree Water flows and nourishes me It babbles to itself in play Busily tumbling o'er the way I remember I can flow free Water flows and nourishes me

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Date: 9/25/2022 10:08:00 PM
"Water flows and nourishes me" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Julie Draper
Date: 9/25/2022 10:46:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj, your encouragement is much appreciated :)
Date: 9/24/2022 7:44:00 AM
I love the way your poem "flows" Julie. Nicely done :) Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Julie Draper
Date: 9/25/2022 10:47:00 PM
Thank you Linda. I enjoyed writing this one :)
Date: 9/24/2022 7:12:00 AM
Julie, I feel as though I’m immersed in this lovely forest setting! Congratulations!
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Julie Draper
Date: 9/25/2022 10:48:00 PM
Thank you Kim, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it :)
Date: 8/16/2022 9:09:00 AM
Julie, this is a fine kyrielle with a very pleasant refrain. I enjoyed reading it. Loved the rhyme and the flow like the stream!
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Julie Draper
Date: 8/16/2022 12:11:00 PM
Thank you very much for the encouragement - it's much appreciated :)

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