The Watching Windows

THE    WATCHING    WINDOWS

City of a million windows all lit up
At the hour of  vermilion dusk
The void dims into deep violet
With great horizontal bands of inky blue-black
Clouds  -  harmless, unmenacing  -
Yet determined  to block the last efforts of the sinking sun.
And the windows add their puny effort  - 
Their muted clarinets   - to the strains of  
The fading  golden orchestra’s brassy finale.
Little yellow squares all watching me watch them :
Close fellows staring fixedly into my bedroom;
More distant cousins already blinking  with sleep.
Windows in vertical piles waiting to 	
Be darkened as the clock hands sweep 
Up the last vestiges of day,
And switch on the tiny fiery flares 
Over the blue-black  vault : watchful  figures,
Ever-vigilant, never sleeping,  windows  of the sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 3:13 AM
now, this one hoists your sloping poetic flag, lol... kidding! syd, you make my senses breathe.. free verse from you, i like!! really like... where is that sky?? tremendous! come visit..:) hugggs, nette
Warden Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 2:28 AM
Again...very good..The stars in the sky..windows of Heaven..hugs...jo
Carlson Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 2:05 AM
really cool poetry...I love it so much I could marry it...seriously - Kyle
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