The watch collector

That smile,
That smile could put the sun to shame
Those eyes are brighter than amber, even when in shade
Those words could mend a broken soul
That laugh could bring to life, a dying hope 
For I fell in love with a work of art 
That watch collector that stole my heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Roy Choudhury Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 7:16 AM
I loved how you used “a dying hope” as a resemblance to the fact that hope is always an exaggeration and it is always something disappointing, and so Hope was a feeling to be killed in a cold heart. It was awesome! Keep it up! I loved it <333
Luwang Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Thank you so much. I am glad you liked my poem
Agustin Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 4:53 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Luwang Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 5:45 AM
Thank you so much for warm welcoming words, I feel blessed to become a part of this community
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