The Warring Curses

We stood atop God's hill
among God's hills
and saw no mountains
where mountains are not seen,
but gazed hatefully, fearfully, longingly
into Satan's valley.
Ours was the grandest little hill,
and below was the wickedest valley,
and between was the contest of angels dark and fair
where the living is not easy
and the dying is not quick.
At once we knew both
all that there was to be known
and nothing that could be known.
Once born, twice seduced, yet more,
we dared to peer sideways and downward
and morbidly at the edge of the plague.
And weary, or indifferent,
some were claimed,
vanished into the core of the depraved,
where the dying is not easy
for the killing is not quick.
The warring curses were one.

6th July 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 8:11 AM
I njoyed rereading this one.
Sharp Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 10:03 AM
Thanks, Richard, I'm pleased if it was good for another look.
Carmack Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 10:15 AM
I like this Lawrence.
Sharp Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 11:44 AM
Thanks very much, Rob, very pleased that you enjoyed.
Hobbs Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 6:02 AM
Your choice of phrases is very open for multiple interpretations and full of metaphor. Excellent contrasts between the waring factions. The language puts me in mind of something out of The Divine Comedy, Milton, or Blake.
Sharp Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 10:08 AM
Thanks Luke, if it brings to mind anything from the great old epics, I'm pleased to hear it.
Ashley Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 11:08 AM
I feel an awe-inspired beauty in the exquisite expression of your deeply meaningful poem, Lawrence. Your artistry touches my spirit and your imagery enlivens my imagination. I enjoyed the contrast in your poem and the nuances of your word play. Brilliant poetry! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Sharp Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Very high praise indeed, Susan, thank you no end.
Lindley Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 9:07 AM
Exceptional poetry from a true and gifted poet! A fav, a shining gem...
Sharp Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 9:34 AM
Thank you, far too kind, you are.
Chircop Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 1:59 PM
I really enjoyed your play with words here...
Sharp Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Thanks, I just about enjoyed it myself...;-)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 8:59 AM
Somehow this brought to mind the Devil bringing Jesus to the top of a mountain to view all the kingdoms of the world. I enjoyed this piece. A belated welcome to the soup.
Sharp Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 9:40 AM
I hadn't actually thought about it, or intended it that way, but that is a very keen and welcome new perspective.
Man Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 10:58 PM
Lawerence.. enjoyed your write about the Warring Curses!
Sharp Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 1:32 AM
Thank you Lyric Man. Later in the day, when I can steal some time, I look forward to reading yours.
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