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time slips through our fingers most unapologetically ignoring our pathetic pleas cycles of sunrise followed by nightfall seem endless yet each day not resembling the next at least not always, maybe never but there comes a day for us all when time stops, stands still inflicting a wretched pain it seems like the end but it's not really we somehow carry on till once again time slips through our fingers this time almost apologetic Posted on September 26, 2024

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Date: 9/26/2024 8:54:00 PM
The 'Grimm Bros.' have nothing on you tonight, Line. Chilling lines here. ~ Haunted Wolf
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Date: 9/28/2024 3:43:00 AM
Thanks, Gershon ~ a somber breeze this time
Date: 9/26/2024 4:50:00 PM
Interesting musings about time.
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Date: 9/28/2024 3:42:00 AM
Thanks, Mike ~

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