The Warmth of Our Souls

PANTOUM ON WRITING POETRY
Sponsor's name: L MILTON HANKINS
Date Pantoum was written: December 4th 2022


When the world gets dark and cold,
Your love feels like the warmth of fire
Even when my hair is grey and old
Your heart is all I will admire.

Your love feels like the warmth of fire
You have given me a quiet peace. 
Your heart is all I will admire
Because you are God’s masterpiece 

You have given me a quiet peace
No place on earth is as safe as your heart
Because you are God’s masterpiece,
This love feels like a work of art

No place on earth is as safe as your heart
I feel blessed to experience this gift
This love feels like a work of art.
I pray our souls never drift 

I feel blessed to experience this gift
Even when my hair is grey and old
I pray our souls never drift
when the world gets dark and cold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Agustin Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 11:56 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Agrawal Avatar
January 27, 2023 at 10:28 AM
Impressive. One of my favourites until now! All the best keep going!
Sesa Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 4:30 PM
Well said
Ini Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 4:16 PM
Beautifully written
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