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The Warmth and Passion of Spring

The sun descends in western sky as warbler trills his lullaby. The warm spring breeze blows through your hair as scent of jasmine fills the air. You stroll along a country lane, and listen to spring’s sweet refrain. This warm spring day has come to end as thoughts of love again impend. The thoughts of passion tangled sheets, and whispers only night repeats; the secrets only lovers know when passion leaves their hearts aglow. And in the morn the sun’s display; another bright and lovely day. A sign of Mother Nature’s flair; a sign that spring is in the air. March 3, 2018 Contest: Best Rhyming Poem in March Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Date: 4/10/2018 12:36:00 PM
A fantastic write John, reminds me of summer breeze seals and croft for some reason, that means this write is really good, congrats on another win!
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/10/2018 12:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, John, I appreciate it. Perhaps it's the scent of jasmine in the air that reminds you of "Summer Breeze" one of my favorite songs from the early 70's. John
Date: 4/8/2018 1:13:00 PM
Lovely, John. Congrats on your win.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/8/2018 1:19:00 PM
Thinks so much, Line, I appreciate it. John
Date: 4/7/2018 8:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful spring poem. Veey uplifting write.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/7/2018 8:44:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 4/5/2018 5:28:00 PM
Excellent write with great imagery , John.. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/6/2018 8:47:00 AM
Thank you, Eve, I appreciate it. John
Date: 4/5/2018 10:19:00 AM
just beautifully expressed dear John, I am never surprised to see you on the winners list! thank you and congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/6/2018 8:46:00 AM
Thank you, Luloo, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting such great contests. John
Date: 3/10/2018 7:22:00 AM
Love the flow and rhyme on this one very much. A splendid spring write that added shine to my morning and sweetness to my coffee. Each line - divine! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/10/2018 7:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, CayCay, I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Your comments always fill me with warmth. John
Date: 3/3/2018 6:53:00 PM
This is an awesome example of the signs of spring John! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/4/2018 6:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, Cheryl, I appreciate your comments. John
Date: 3/3/2018 6:16:00 PM
Very beautiful job making the reader experience the sights, sounds, aroma, and sensuality of spring.
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/4/2018 6:25:00 AM
Thank you, Rhoda, I appreciate your comments. John
Date: 3/3/2018 10:36:00 AM
this is just lovely, john! best of luck in the contest...
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/4/2018 6:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Ilene.
Date: 3/3/2018 7:46:00 AM
A pleasant, beautiful spring poem John! Good luck in the contest :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/3/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi, I appreciate you. John

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