The War: a Lifetime Long

This is everything we've ever been taught
A lesson learned is a lesson more or less forgotten
With the weight of your world, the hum of your tune
Everything is over all to soon
With a crack of a whip it all turns slow
when everywhere we've been
is everywhere we'll go

We bellow and bask and things gone wrong
this is more or less hearing; not listening to the song

The more you give, the more they take
And the gift in return?

a smile,

the essence of fake.

The gift of life, not the job or task
is a gift from the future, the present, the past

It's a beautiful tempest

a song

Life long.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 5, 2009 at 9:23 AM
Interesting piece for the reader to ponder about. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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September 4, 2009 at 3:30 AM
I welcome you to PoetrySoup Derek. Wishing you the best in your future writing. Love, Carol
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